Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Week 10 Elevator Pitch No 3

For my third elevator pitch I took everyone's comments and suggestions into consideration.  I received excellent feedback on how I could improve and make my pitch stronger.  I filmed my pitch away from my window this time because it was distracting to someone before.  I also dressed a bit nicer than my previous t-shirt and shorts for a more professional look as suggested by a couple people.  I also got closer to the camera this time because someone mentioned I was a bit far away before.  In my previous pitch, I only mentioned that my cases are for Iphones, and someone was interested if I make the same cases for Android phones.  So, I added Androids into the mix.  Someone wondered how my product compares to Lifeproof cases so I touched on that topic briefly and added how my product is also waterproof.  I also related to someone who commented on my pitch saying they always throw their phone under their towel at the beach to keep it from getting overheated.  And finally, I went into more specifics on how the case actually blocks the heat from getting through to the phone; someone made a comment that they were confused how a "thermal insulated phone case" wouldn't cause the phone to get overheated in itself. 

I was just speaking freely here, but it probably seems like I am looking at a script!  Who knew you have to look at the camera lens and not at your reflection...



2 comments:

  1. Analeis,

    I think that this has the potential to be a great product, and I could see a lot of people being interested in this new technology. The fact that you brought up a specific problem at the beginning of the pitch means that you did a nice job of drawing in the audience, then your explanation of the product was also very thorough and informative for potential customers. You also seemed very calm and poised, which displays confidence in your product and as well in your ability to talk about it. Great job, and feel free to check out my elevator pitch here: http://jakesmithent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html

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  2. I think your idea is great and very well thought out. I liked that you compared your product to lifeproof and from the sounds of it your product will win over them. Your camera angle made it look like you were sitting down and also I think dressing more professionally would be a great idea as well. All in all great job
    Here is a link to my pitch as well: http://courtneydscott.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html

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